Your website needs better copy

Your design is fine. But your copy is confusing. Visitors don't get what you do in 5 seconds, so they leave.

I'll review your site and tell you exactly what to fix. $250. 15-minute video. Done in 48 hours.

Here's what you'll get — a detailed video review walking through your site

Example website review showing detailed feedback

Real founder. Real feedback. No AI bullshit.

For $250, you get:

Copy review

Clear, compelling words that convert

SEO review

Get found by the right people

Performance review

Speed optimizations that matter

Design + UX audit

What works, what doesn't

Bad copy kills conversions

Beautiful design. Solid product. But confusing copy means people leave.

You need someone to tell you the truth about your site. That's what this is.

What you get

Clear copy

Is your headline clear? Does your CTA make sense? I'll tell you which words work and which ones waste space.

Design that works

Colors, spacing, typography — small choices that build trust. I'll show you what's distracting and what helps.

Smooth UX

Where do people get confused? Where do they bail? I'll walk through your site like a first-time visitor and show you where the friction is.

Fast loading

Slow sites lose customers. I'll check your load times and show you the quick wins.

How it works

1

Send me your website URL and pay $250

2

I review it within 48 hours (sometimes I rope in a co-reviewer for an extra pair of fresh eyes)

3

You get a 15-minute video walking through what works, what doesn't, and what to fix first

Who's reviewing your site

Trevor I. Lasn

I'm Trevor. Building for the web since 2015. Started as a developer, learned design and copywriting by shipping products and watching what worked.

I've built sites that flopped and sites that converted. I know the difference. I'll tell you what yours needs.

Google Search Console — hundreds of thousands of organic clicks

Google Search Console showing hundreds of thousands of organic clicks

My blog analytics — real readers over the years

Blog analytics showing real readers

28K followers on Medium — writing that resonates

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